Five Sentence Fiction – Charmed


Lord, it was cold. Drifting this far away from the Sun in nothing but a hoodie and shorts, he’d frozen solid a long time ago. Not for the last time, he thought how he’d been the toast of the bar with his joking wishes of “I want to live forever” and “I wish this whole goddamned planet didn’t exist.” Jeanie had been damned cute, and he was drunk, and the feel of her body as she slipped the necklace with all the charms over his head was something special. Saturn really was a beautiful planet, especially up close like this. 


One Response to “Five Sentence Fiction – Charmed”

  1. Pity he won’t be able to get drunk again to be more careful what he wishes for next time. 🙂

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