FSF – Locked

Prompt: http://lilliemcferrin.com/five-sentence-fiction-locked/

She went in, her eyes becoming blinded to light and her ears deaf to sound, seeking the inner knowledge. She went deeper, and passed through the dark realm between that which is known and that which is not. She had been here before, traveling often after her teacher showed her the way; this far, and no further. She sought deeper knowledge, and pressed further inward, fighting against the resistance which had stopped even the wisest, even the strongest, even the best – but not her. The inner world was filled with power that would change all, but once inside, there was no way out, and there was no key.


4 Responses to “FSF – Locked”

  1. What is learned cannot be unlearned, no matter how much we might wish we could unlearn it.

  2. Reminds me of the Day watch/Night watch movies 🙂

  3. I like this. It is dark, but poetic. Nicely done!

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